At the seaside_300字

　　My family and I went to the seaside .My dad went fishing in the sae.My mum unber the umbrella.She read a book. My uncle ate ice cream.My consins ate bread.My brothers nade a sandcastle.My sisters basked on the sunny beach.Mike went swimming in the sea.Kate and I played football.We were very happy.

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My family and I went to the seaside. My dad went fishing in thesea. My mumstayed underthe umbrella. She read a book. My uncle ate an ice cream. My consins ate bread. My brothersmadea sandcastle. My sistersbathedon the sunny beach. Mike went swimming in the sea. Kate and I played football. We were very happy.

修改老师：Crystal 老师

六年级:吕晓燕

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