Spring is coming.Flowers growing.Everyone is very very happy. Spring is nice and warm.We can do many things: I can go fishing, the ice is melting. I can go climbing, the weather is sunny. I can play outside with my friends,the weather is not cold outside. I can go hiking with my family,the sun is warm. ... In the spring,farmer is very busy,beacause they must do farmer work.They grow vegetables,too. Spring is interesting.I like it,like its nice,like its warm,like its animate.Ha!Ha!
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Spring is coming. Flowers are blooming. Everyone is happy. In spring, the weather is nice and warm. I can do many things. The ice is melting, so I can go fishing. The weather is sunny, so I can go climbing. I can play outside with my friends for the warm weather. I can also go hiking with my family. In spring, farmers are very busy, because they must plant crops. They grow vegetables, too. Spring is interesting. I like it very much.
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