like spring. I want to embrace the spring. Touch the flowers, lying on the grass, smelling the fragrance of flowers, feel the thick tree, feel the embrace of spring, I want to embrace the spring. Rain, I want to feel the spring rain, feel the spring, spring, ah, let me into your warm embrace it! I like spring!
修改后:
I like spring. I want to embrace the spring. I want to touch the flowers, lie on the grass, smell the fragrance of flowers, and feel the thick trees. I want to feel the spring rain, too. Let me run into the warm embrace of spring! I like spring!
修改老师:Crystal 老师六年级:潘子瑶
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